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Actually had no issues with the reported constant anger issues. His hair trigger is pretty accurate for the background he has had. Additionally, information is supplied about his background in small bits here and there. I like that.

I liked the development. The class is interesting, though the maths on the bonus stats added to base stats I either misunderstood or they don't add up.

I like the interaction with the NPCs and the bonuses I see coming his way because of it. His third demon... no surprise, but I liked how it fit.

Seriously, the only thing I did not care for was the "oh such a stud, all these girls gotta get in my pants". Nearly put the book down when the playboy article started. Decided to flip pages to pass it (them) instead. Having experience with Ds, I can appreciate how you handled it. Just that I, personally, do not care to read playboy fantasy articles in my LitRPG. That is personal biase, though it did detract for me.

Back to the positive. The grammar and punctuation was well done and the story flowed. I loved how you dealt with Fluff and have a feeling I see where you are going there.

Had it just not been for the deep, involved sex scenes, I would give it 4.5 out of 5. As it is, I would give it a 3.5. And, no... it is not because I am a prude. Far from it. It just, for me, was too much. Hints of it, flashes of innuendo, leaving more for my mind to develop based on a set of scenes here and there would have been much more enjoyable...for me.

Btw, I do not see a full on harem. Lots of lovelies about; but, so far, I see a couple of different relationships forming. You have the Ds which makes sense for a succubus. And, the potential for something growing from that. You have the light, friendly sexual relationship with a friend that may fade and still keep the friendship. And, you have a relationship that could get ...interesting...especially if it is what I think it is. I also see the potential for something with the healer, if Gerv keeps on the way he is.

Anyway, just my two cents.


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Gamer for Life Alpha World Book 1 edition by Daniel Schinhofen Literature Fiction eBooks Reviews

It was great up to the point of constant goblin, orc grinding it was excruciating to read after that point. You basically knew what they were going to be doing the second they woke up. There is also no plot at all besides killing orcs or goblins or having a threesom. Which leads me to the next point, it was like the writer was getting bored of his own writing about senseless time wasting on orc, goblin killing so he decided to turn it into 50 shades of harem to fill his bdsm fantasy. It had so much potential and just squandered all of it's hopes by making the MC overpowered and able to carry/use any weapon in the game by like level 6. There is a possibility though you may like it! If you like to read about 100 different ways to kill a goblin/orc without any bloody gruesome details then I guess you might give this 3 stars. If you want an honest 5 start litRPG read Eden's Gate it is 100x more entertaining than this book. It felt like a complete waste of time, the only reason I finished it is because I had so much time invested in it I might as well. It was a poor decision on my end. Sorry. Not sorry. Great writing skills though if you could give it a plot at all, and not go to the same 2 places every day it might have been worth reading.
While the writing itself is fine, the plot tended to be repetitive. MC teams up with other players goes out and kills some orcs, etc., and levels up. The gaming aspect of the story is likewise repetitive and detracts from the flow and pace of the story. Then about 3/4 of the way into the book there is a threesome with the MC and two women. While I don't mind sex scenes per se, I simply didn't see any contribution to the plot.
Sort of fun at the beginning, but quickly becomes tedious. 65% of the book was fighting pretty much the same goblins repeatedly. The fight scenes were really bland, and the details were bare. Not a lot of fun to watch somebody sit back and order their pets to kill stuff. Another issue was he seemed to forget he had the fireblast spell at all half the time. And then around the 60% mark the books becomes increasingly mired in cliche and distasteful sex scenes. Not a lot of poetry in those love scenes, just the bestial fantasies of a teenager drooling over girls he can't have. by the 88% mark of the book my eyes rolled out of my head due to increasingly flimsy innuendos, and I can no longer read.

I would not suggest reading this book
I like the premise, and the overall direction. But the cringe factor is high with the large amount of "m'lady" type content in the book. I would have enjoyed it far more if the main character wasn't constantly flirting with the female characters, and in such an awkward fashion. There's only so many "tip of the fedora" moments I can take before I am repulsed to the point of taking a break from the book.
I'm not a prude but toward the end of the book the main character gets his wires crossed with a teenage creeper with degrading sex fantasies surrounded by scores of submissive women only too happy to indulge him. It just comes so far out of left field that it's just jarring.

I mean who just 50 shades of grey the last few chapters of a pg rated video game themed book like that? I have never before wondered if there is a clean version of something because I might like it better. Unless you are super into throwing down with blow up dolls then it doesn't add anything to the narrative.
I like this book, the main character Alburret is interesting and his internal monologues and dialogs are fun to read. There isn't much in the way of action. Just a lot of grinding missions lack detail. There is no real plot to follow there is no antagonist. Readers should know about 2/3 of the way in turns into an adult fantasy erotic novel. The scenes are a bit graphic.My main problem with the book is the story doesn't seem to go anywhere. There is no opposition to the main character. The character doesn't have a mission beyond living. Perhaps the sequel will introduce an over arching story.
Spoilers included.....

Actually had no issues with the reported constant anger issues. His hair trigger is pretty accurate for the background he has had. Additionally, information is supplied about his background in small bits here and there. I like that.

I liked the development. The class is interesting, though the maths on the bonus stats added to base stats I either misunderstood or they don't add up.

I like the interaction with the NPCs and the bonuses I see coming his way because of it. His third demon... no surprise, but I liked how it fit.

Seriously, the only thing I did not care for was the "oh such a stud, all these girls gotta get in my pants". Nearly put the book down when the playboy article started. Decided to flip pages to pass it (them) instead. Having experience with Ds, I can appreciate how you handled it. Just that I, personally, do not care to read playboy fantasy articles in my LitRPG. That is personal biase, though it did detract for me.

Back to the positive. The grammar and punctuation was well done and the story flowed. I loved how you dealt with Fluff and have a feeling I see where you are going there.

Had it just not been for the deep, involved sex scenes, I would give it 4.5 out of 5. As it is, I would give it a 3.5. And, no... it is not because I am a prude. Far from it. It just, for me, was too much. Hints of it, flashes of innuendo, leaving more for my mind to develop based on a set of scenes here and there would have been much more enjoyable...for me.

Btw, I do not see a full on harem. Lots of lovelies about; but, so far, I see a couple of different relationships forming. You have the Ds which makes sense for a succubus. And, the potential for something growing from that. You have the light, friendly sexual relationship with a friend that may fade and still keep the friendship. And, you have a relationship that could get ...interesting...especially if it is what I think it is. I also see the potential for something with the healer, if Gerv keeps on the way he is.

Anyway, just my two cents.